Hi Cecilia. Nice job drawing the pictures (especially Africa) and I think the map of the Egypt area is informative. Your key for the map is great, but where is your key for the poster? You should add in a key to mark the five themes. Both Egypt and India have a river, the Nile and the Indus respectively, that influenced agriculture. In Egypt, the pharaohs were at the top of the hierarchy; in India the Brahmans were at the top of the hierarchy. Could you clarify why you drew a house?
- Sam Lee =)
Hey Holly! I like how your title and timeline are clear and easy to understand. Red, a color associated with China, might not have been the best color to use on an orange poster. I saw how on your poster, you used a blue triangle to represent the social hierarchy; very creative. Both in China and in India, social hierarchies are present to influence the person's daily life. I did notice that the levels within the hierarchy were a bit different in China versus in India. The pictures inside the head seem to be a bit unclear; could you explain them?
- Sam Lee =)
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